Bertn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A breads life]

Pretty funny. :3

I liked it! :3 It was really funny and I really liked how the bread moves. The story line was also kind of good. I thought that on the message from the doctor there would be something like "You became toast" but then I saw the smile and the "cancer note" and I really had to laugh. :D

Also good job with this animation and keep it up Lochie. :)

Bertn

PS: RIP bread.

Lochie responds:

The bread ollies when he walks.
I SHALL ANIMATE MY BEST JUST FOR YOU. <3

[Gone to Bel Air, brb.]

AWESOME RANDOMNESS :D

Freakin' awesome lochie :') The song just fits perfect with your style of random animating. :3

And did I just see the pirate of the Pirate Preloader? Ö Anyway, good job, I really liked it, you're skills are the best. :3

Your MC motion twee animation is the best and even your FBF animation is good, ILUVYOU! x)

Bertn

Lochie responds:

Yes, you did see Mr. PiratePreloader in there. :D

Thank you for saying my tweenage is the best. :D

[satin gold]

Very good animation! :D

I really like this animation cuz first of all, it's with pirates (I'm making a Pirate Collab, w00t xD) and second, the animation was very good and smooth and the graphics are almost perfect. :3

The song was a little bit boring but still funny. I really liked how you made the pirate sing.

Very good job and keep it up! :D

Bertn

PS: Did you change the preloader? x)

[Haze: Say No To Nectar]

Average. :)

This game could use a lot more effort and a lot of improvements.

First of all, the drawings and the graphics. :3 Everything looked a little bit noobish, please improve those.

Second, SOUND! The voice acting quality was pretty bad. You could search a professional voice actor at the BBS forum. :D

3th, the storyline wasn't really original or funny. Try to write a good and funny script and animate it then.

Anyway, it's not a bad start but you could make your animation a lot better. :3

Good luck and I hope I helped,

Bertn

LoveShineHero responds:

goood

[BrokeClock Mountain]

Very nice! :D

Nice graphics, funny story and clocks, PERFECT :D

You also made good use of Speakonia, I like that. :3 I thinks this game is a little bit underrated cuz it's a clock movie. I think it's very awesome and funny and I really enjoyed it.

Anyway, keep it up ToadClock! :)

Bertn

[Psykedeelia]

Nice funny FBF animation! :3

I enjoyed this little movie, it was funny and I liked the song!

"Ringringringringring BANANAPHONE! :D"

I like how you draw so sketchy but maybe you should try to make your graphics look perfect and do it fbf, that would be awesome. :D

The way the characters moves sometimes is just so freakin' funny, I also like that. :3

I liked how you used the white flash to go from part to part, good job! :)

So for short, a good overall video, keep it up!

Bertn

[PINATA!]

Lol'd, short but good. :3

Nice animation, good effects, nice graphics and smooth animation. The sounds are also kind of good so good job.

About the animation, it's short but it's funny, maybe you could make some other stuff and make a big random movie about Pinata's. :3

So, good job and keep it up Noxx11! :D

AhhhrrBertn

Noxx11 responds:

Thanks for the review! That's a good idea, maybe I will do a longer one. :)

[Stick Series - Episode 6]

Not great animation but really funny. :3

Yea, the animation wasn't that perfect, but it was kind of funny. :D

For the animation, you could first of all make the graphics look 100% perfect. The effect of the wall was good but the walk of the stickman looks bad. You could make it look more realistic, practice that. :D

Also, practice your explosion, the movie would be a lot more awesome with a better explosion. :)

Anyway, the movie wasn't bad at all, it just could have been better. ;D

Bertn

neon8100 responds:

Thanks