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Fun and good! ;D

Current Score
3.62 / 5.00 (+ 0.0097)

I really enjoyed watching this movie, I liked every single part of it, it's funny and well animated, good job!


The good old Marky style, lovely, childish and still great and artistic. It's really similar to the style of MorrowDays but it does has something special in it, something only the really MarkyLyne can make, ILUVIT! :D I've also noticed that you're really good in animating expressions and feelings, the way you make your characters look is just awesome!

Sounds and voice acting:

Great! The voice actor really did a great job, congrats to FatKidWitAJetPak! I also like the sound effects, they made this flash even better. (:


Haha, really funny! :D I really had to laugh some times, specially when the boy said, "oh hey, mom...". Funny and simple, good job!



This is a really great submission, from the small preloader game to the animation itself! I really think this is very underrated, a 3.62 is too less for such a great animation/flash like this. (:

So, keep up the good work and good luck in further projects,


PS: You're still working on your "Oasis - Wonderwall" submission? :D

MarkyLyne responds:

Wow thanks man, most reviews i get is " That was funny... T_T "
Yeah, im not sure about wonderwall, its getting abit hard to finish ect but im working on another movie with a completely different style which should be out in about a month ?

Thanks for reviewing anyway ^_^

Simply great!

I don't really like to give 10 stars cause' 10 stars are for the really BEST animations but, for this animation I'll make an exception.

It wasn't the best, but it sure was great! Awesome FBF animation, awesome art and graphics, awesome smoothness and awesome sounds! This animation really looked perfect to me.
I also like your use of the V-cam (I guess it was v-cam cause' it's like unbelievable hard to do it with motion tweening.) and the way you gave everything a very "Halloweenie" aura. The music also fits perfect with the animation.

Some other things I've seen:
Since your participation in the Pirate Collab you've really grown a lot, your flash skills and experience are much better (and they already were great :D) and I'm really sure that you'll be a VERY great animator in the future. (:

I'm really looking forward to your next submission Noxx11.<3


ps: this movie is TOTALY underrated!

Noxx11 responds:

Thanks so much! I think that The Pirate Collab was definitely a learning experience - I learned so much about animation during its creation (FBF Special FX especially, which I now use all the time). It was a VCam for two shots (the demon's entrance and the demon flying) but the rest (zooming in from her window, ect, was other tweens. Thanks for the ten, and for being awesome! :D

Needs improvement!

It's a funny movie and the beginning really made me laugh but this movie does need a lot of improvement!

First of all, voice acting. There are a lot of good voice actors here on Newgrounds, try and find someone who can do it better! (:

Second, graphics! That's right, the graphics. They just aren't good. The characters looked funny and the BG is good but please, make everything move a little bit more so it doesn't get boring that fast!

Also, lip syncing, sometimes I just didn't see who of the 2 guys were talking. x] If you ad lip syncing this movie would have been A LOT better. :3

3th, story line.
Just AWESOME! ;D I love the story line, I really had to laugh a few times so good job with that. :3

Good luck in further projects.<3


AwkwardSomething responds:

I refuse to just purchase voice actors like the cliche' of every other movie on Newgrounds. Part of the charm of this movie for me is that I do it all myself.

I hear simultaneously that the graphics are good and bad. I will maybe make some more animation in later episodes, but I think overall the graphical style will remain the same. That's also part of why I like this.

The storyline is completely ad libitum.

Below average collab!

I was one of the first to see that this collab was started, on the same day that I wanted to start the collab with the same idea and I watched the thread a few time and I've seen a lot of bad stuff and some good.

First of all, I really loved the preloader game, it was 1 of the only good things about the whole collab and you deleted it D:

The menu:

Average, nothing really special, not really great graphics but nice tune. The bios had something original in it but was kind of boring and not really interesting.
You really had to put the preloader game in it somewhere!

The animation:

The music at the beginning is horrible, it isn't even a loop! Most of the parts really rucked and I didn't really enjoy watching this collab, it wasn't funny and it was really boring after a while. There are even some parts that are only a sketch. ö
There was also a scene with some dancing characters, it hadn't even music in it. ö And after a lot of boring stuff, finally, Honto, that was just one AMAZING part, it did need some sounds but I really liked it. After that, some other stupid animations that aren't funny and are really boring. And after that, another nice animation, the ninja that jumps over houses and got hit by a plain, that one was funny! ;D

So for short, a lot of horrible parts and... only 2 good parts! Next time you make a collab, only accept good parts so you can make a small but decent collab and try to compile it better, it just sucked.

So now you probably think, why does he give me a 4? Because it's a collab, I know how hard it is to make collabs so I do have a lot of respect for you but you just need to learn some more things so your next collab will be much better than this one! :3

I also think the idea is stolen from the Pirate Collab but that hasn't anything to do with the animation and stuff. (: I do wish you good luck in further projects!<3


Superawesomeness responds:

Its called inspiration, not stealing.

Not bad, far from good.

Well, this collab isn't really bad but it isn't good either.

First of all, what was the main idea? Different eggs who keep falling or something? Well, you could have done so much more with this idea, not just 5 stupid different eggs who are falling in a motion tween, everyone can do that! ;D

Second, you said in the Author Comments "It took us almost 2 weeks to finish this but it totally worth all the time".
2 weeks? That's nothing! Some collabs take months or even years to complete, like 'the Anime Collab', this collab took 9 full months to complete, that like 10 times more than this collab! So next time you make a collab, don't try to finish it as fast as you can but give it time. (:

3th, yea, finally, a good thing. The Easter egg! ;D It was kind of cool, it's just an average mini game but it was fun, for 2 min. (: (My top score was 25, woohoo xD)

Anyway, to keep it short, this collab could have been A LOT better, all parts where just made in one day and I didn't see any effort, try better next time. :3

Good luck in further projects,


Argentin responds:

Finally a nice review
NG needs more people like you
Well I always hurry things because i don't have patience for anything
And besides this was my first collab so it's normal to make some mistakes
Well i hope that my second collab will be better

Not good.

Nope, I'm sorry but this collab just isn't good.

Here are some reasons and ways to improve it:

To ScrewedComedy, I can see you just wanted to finish and submit this collab as fast as you can, there are not much members and not much great parts (only 2! D: ). You didn't even took time to make a good preloader...

ScrewedComedy, when you make a collab, you work together with other people so if you screw it up, you also screw it up for those other people.

Some suggestions:

if you make a collab, don't just accept everyone who wants to join, there are a lot of crappy animators in the flash forum so only accept the ones that are average or good. (:

Also, to get some great animators you could PM people who joined other collabs, this gives you a bigger chance of getting better people in your collab.

And last, give your collab SOME TIME! :D


Anyway, why don't I like this submission?

I always hated those stupid 'Cliff' animations but I thought this collab could have been cool but not, this collab is just some of those hateful animations together. D:
Too much stickmans, too much madness, too much crappy animations.


But, there are SOME good parts, 2 actually. :3

I likes 1 of your parts ScrewedComedy, you have a good and funny stickman style and I liked the part of Tommy, it was too short but good. :D

So you, I didn't really enjoyed this collab but if you make another one in future, keep my suggestions in mind. :)


ScrewedComedy responds:


One of the best collabs ever. :3

Good work Morrow, you made a great collab about this great idea! (: I think all the parts were awesome, great effects, great animation and great style! :3

The preloader game was kind of hard, my top score was something like 2500. xD Maybe you could make him jump higher?
The menu was awesome, there was even a cardboard SKATER! :D Awesome job Morrow.

All the parts were overall pretty great, everyone did a greate job AND congrats to the daily 2nd. :3

*Recommendng for NG Collab Collection and praying for front page<3*



MorrowDays responds:

woot woot! thanks bertn! ya! we made front page AND NG collabs!

glad you liked it! ARRRRRR!

Pure awesomeness. :3

One of the best collabs EVER, I really enjoyed watching it and this is also the reason why I joined the SFC so. :3

Well, like I did with the Pico Day Skate Collab I'm going to review every part separate so, let's get started:

The menu+intro:

Awesome menu, just a nice clean style with everything you need, good job with that. The intro is also very nice, just some random shit. :D (Also, the Easter Egg is in the skater at the menu, CLICK IT NOW :3)


Nice part, good tricks, good graphics but yea, maybe a little bit too much sound effects. But still good job in the original Marcy style with nice effects, GOOD JOB!


The same old school Cronic style like I know it :D Good music, nice realistic tricks and awesome BG's! :3 Also good sound effects. :)


One of my favorites! :D Really awesome and good. Smooth animation, good animation and even humor :3 Very nice animation, keep it up Jestar! :3


The awesome MC motiontween style of Lochie, awesome! :D Realistic, good sound effects, just the best. I freakin' love Lochies style. :3


Also wonderful animation, nice BG, funny and and smooth animation. I really like the style of Mraw, it's so smoothie and good. Love it :)


Good FBF animation, funny and smooth. Not much to say about, really good. :3


Really funny, maybe not realistic but good animation. Very good outro for this wonderful animation. :3 Also funny song, I like it. :) But how can he skate faster than a car? xD Also good end, I liked it. :D

The credits:

Awesome, good music, funny animation and smooth, really awesome! :3


So overall, very good Collab, keep it up guys and I'm looking forward to see the Skate Flash Collab 3! :3


cronic-22 responds:

thansk for teh breakdown we appreciate a nice clean review.

Pretty funny. :3

I liked it! :3 It was really funny and I really liked how the bread moves. The story line was also kind of good. I thought that on the message from the doctor there would be something like "You became toast" but then I saw the smile and the "cancer note" and I really had to laugh. :D

Also good job with this animation and keep it up Lochie. :)


PS: RIP bread.

Lochie responds:

The bread ollies when he walks.


Freakin' awesome lochie :') The song just fits perfect with your style of random animating. :3

And did I just see the pirate of the Pirate Preloader? Ö Anyway, good job, I really liked it, you're skills are the best. :3

Your MC motion twee animation is the best and even your FBF animation is good, ILUVYOU! x)


Lochie responds:

Yes, you did see Mr. PiratePreloader in there. :D

Thank you for saying my tweenage is the best. :D

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