Bertn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A breads life]

Pretty funny. :3

I liked it! :3 It was really funny and I really liked how the bread moves. The story line was also kind of good. I thought that on the message from the doctor there would be something like "You became toast" but then I saw the smile and the "cancer note" and I really had to laugh. :D

Also good job with this animation and keep it up Lochie. :)

Bertn

PS: RIP bread.

Lochie responds:

The bread ollies when he walks.
I SHALL ANIMATE MY BEST JUST FOR YOU. <3

[Gone to Bel Air, brb.]

AWESOME RANDOMNESS :D

Freakin' awesome lochie :') The song just fits perfect with your style of random animating. :3

And did I just see the pirate of the Pirate Preloader? Ö Anyway, good job, I really liked it, you're skills are the best. :3

Your MC motion twee animation is the best and even your FBF animation is good, ILUVYOU! x)

Bertn

Lochie responds:

Yes, you did see Mr. PiratePreloader in there. :D

Thank you for saying my tweenage is the best. :D

[Haze: Say No To Nectar]

Average. :)

This game could use a lot more effort and a lot of improvements.

First of all, the drawings and the graphics. :3 Everything looked a little bit noobish, please improve those.

Second, SOUND! The voice acting quality was pretty bad. You could search a professional voice actor at the BBS forum. :D

3th, the storyline wasn't really original or funny. Try to write a good and funny script and animate it then.

Anyway, it's not a bad start but you could make your animation a lot better. :3

Good luck and I hope I helped,

Bertn

LoveShineHero responds:

goood

[PINATA!]

Lol'd, short but good. :3

Nice animation, good effects, nice graphics and smooth animation. The sounds are also kind of good so good job.

About the animation, it's short but it's funny, maybe you could make some other stuff and make a big random movie about Pinata's. :3

So, good job and keep it up Noxx11! :D

AhhhrrBertn

Noxx11 responds:

Thanks for the review! That's a good idea, maybe I will do a longer one. :)

[Stick Series - Episode 6]

Not great animation but really funny. :3

Yea, the animation wasn't that perfect, but it was kind of funny. :D

For the animation, you could first of all make the graphics look 100% perfect. The effect of the wall was good but the walk of the stickman looks bad. You could make it look more realistic, practice that. :D

Also, practice your explosion, the movie would be a lot more awesome with a better explosion. :)

Anyway, the movie wasn't bad at all, it just could have been better. ;D

Bertn

neon8100 responds:

Thanks

[Death Eagle: Remake]

Not the best, not bad.

Ok, this movie isn't bad but it could use a lot of improvements.

To start, better effects! You can search for Flash effects at Google or look at the Newground tutorials. Your effects really need to get better. :3

Second, make your animation smoother cuz now it really looks noobish. x)

3th, GRAPHICS! Please make them better. The characters look really bad and they also move stupid. The guns look really good btw, that's a really good job.

4th, the music was a little bit annoying but the sound effects are good. :3

5th, blood effects? The blood you made is just like some red lines, use some alpha or something to make it look more like real blood.

6th, improve the menu, don't make it just white with some text, do something with it! :D Add a BG or something but don't leave it just blank. :3

Overall, your flash skills could use a lot of improvement but it's a good start. Just keep practicing and I think you could be a good animator! ;D

Keep it up,

Bertn

Phantox responds:

Thanks for the advice. I've went to the tutorial section but the tutorials there are not that good.

I know the animation is bad. =\ I'm still learning tho.

I don't know how to make good blood effects but I think I've improved since the first time

I was gonna do a better menu but I didn't know what to put on the background.

Anyways, thanks for the review.

[The Yoshi Show 2]

I liked it! :3

The graphics are average but funny, the random story line is funny and it gave me a good laugh. The animation was also really smooth and funny. the main character looks a little bit nerdish but he's still ok. Also, like you said, the sounds is a bit off. :')

But for short, nice animation! :D And one last thing, chance the first part, cuz of that some people will think it's just a spam loop animation! :)

Good job and keep it up! :3

Bertn

chibiyoshi responds:

I'd shoot myself before I make an ENTIRE caramelldansen flash >o> And hey! That main character is me! >:U! Proud nerd :3