Bertn's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[DeRoze Picross]

Nice graphics, nice idea! :3

I liked it, the graphics were ok, the music is fun and the concept is nice. :D The game is also made good.

Also, please make the sound louder, I can't hear it cuz of the music and it's really funny.

Also, the preloader doesn't work, everything stays white until the tank and the stickmans show up.

And last, THE LOGO IS AWESOME! :D

Bertn

Pelemus-McSoy responds:

Thanks!

If I make the music a little louder, it'll probably peak and have reduced quality, and Flash can't make it any louder.

I don't know why preloaders don't like me...quite irksome...

Of Bill in the tank? Hells yes it is! =3

[Automaton prt2]

Nice game! :D

The game is really good, the graphics are nice and it's fun to play. Sometimes it's a little bit boring but overall it's a really good game.

The beginning animation is really nice and smooth, I like your style of animating so keep that up! :3 You also used some really good effects like the way you made the menu look old, etc. I also like the main character, it's cute and style mystic.

So for short, really nice point and click game, it's wonderful! :D

Keep up the good work,

Bertn

[High Ball]

Good job! :)

It isn't original but it's really well done. The graphics are good, the sound effects are funny and the gameplay is smooth. :3

But with this concept you could do a lot more. I also made a ball kick up game once and it's a lot more fun if you can choose other BG's, other cursors, even other balls! :D

Also, you have sounds but... MUSIC? :) Give the game a nice loop so it doesn't get boring that fast. (;

I hope I helped you and keep up the good stuff! :D

Bertn

[D-Struction]

Good idea, a lot of bugs.

I like the idea but the game has a lot of bugs and looks a little bit noobish.

First of all, make better graphics and some more animation cuz for now it's like 80% AS and 20% animation. With more animation your game will look more smoothie. :)

Second, make sure that all the bugs are gone! When the ball is of the screen it's hard to get it back, you can just pick up the ball to destroy stuff, etc.

3th, make it longer! There are only like 4 levels, the one with the houses, the apartment, the dinosaur and the guy. Make more! :3

So for short, the concept is good but it could be a lot better! At last, here are some ideas you could maybe use:

-make a timer, so the people have to destroy everything before the timer is out.
-make sound effects so it's more fun to destroy stuff.
-and just to make sure you get it: FIX THE BUGS! :D

Bertn

[tank training 3]

Not a bad start. :3

It's not a bad start. It just needs a lot of improvement. :)

1st of all, make sure the AS is clean and good explained.

2nd, make sure there aren't any bugs in the game cuz that makes it really shity.

3th, graphic improvement! Everything looks really messy and not everything is really smooth. Also make some FBF animation, that makes everything looks better.

4th, sound effects! For now, you only have 1 sound effect. A stupid shooting sound. x')
You could use some different shooting sounds, background music, a sound if you hit something, a sound when the tank is driving, etc. Just use your fantasy! ^^

So for short, your game needs a lot of improvement but with enough practicing I'm pretty sure you can make something good of it. :) Just keep it going!

I really hope I helped you a little bit,

Bertn

PS: one last thing, change the height of the flash cuz for newgrounds it's a little bit to big, it's only possible to play, and see everything, in pop-up. :')

[Mizeman: The Lost EGG*]

Score: 46 ;D

Nice game, funny character but the game is a bit easy and basic. :)

The game-play was very nice and I was a little bit addicted to it for a moment xD

Also, please make the song into a loop ! ! The song fits perfectly with the game but it was very short. :)

Good luck in further projects ^^

[Sunny Shine]

Cute! :D

It's so cute! ^^ Nice game play with good and chill music.
The childish drawing make everything just perfect ^^
Nothing more to say I think :)

(50th review ;D)

MaxManning responds:

Thanks for the great feedback.

We were definitely aiming for "cute"

[Flips]

Nice! :D

I love good and original Puzzle Games and this is one! xD
wonderful idea, lovely sounds and good AS. The graphics aren't very special but that makes it so perfect.

It's really good and good luck in further projects! ^^

PS: OMG! I don't know why but for some reason this looks like Polarium for the Nintendo DS xD

[Escape school]

LOL :D

Don't know why but I like it xD It's such a crappy stick man game that it's became fun :D Good job! xP

Good luck in further projects! :)

[Paper Mario World]

Best game ever!

I don't say this to much people but this is the best Flash game I've ever played! I've played paper mario on my Gamecube but I've never seen such a good Flash game like this before! Just wonderful work. Funny music, lovley title screen and good AS+animation.

IT'S JUST PERFECT! :D

PS: It's as good like Dad 'n Me ! !

Lesjuh responds:

Then it must be really good.
Thanks, man