Score: 4

"Not good."

submission: the cliff collab

date: July 31, 2008

Nope, I'm sorry but this collab just isn't good.

Here are some reasons and ways to improve it:

To ScrewedComedy, I can see you just wanted to finish and submit this collab as fast as you can, there are not much members and not much great parts (only 2! D: ). You didn't even took time to make a good preloader...

ScrewedComedy, when you make a collab, you work together with other people so if you screw it up, you also screw it up for those other people.

Some suggestions:

if you make a collab, don't just accept everyone who wants to join, there are a lot of crappy animators in the flash forum so only accept the ones that are average or good. (:

Also, to get some great animators you could PM people who joined other collabs, this gives you a bigger chance of getting better people in your collab.

And last, give your collab SOME TIME! :D

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Anyway, why don't I like this submission?

I always hated those stupid 'Cliff' animations but I thought this collab could have been cool but not, this collab is just some of those hateful animations together. D:
Too much stickmans, too much madness, too much crappy animations.

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But, there are SOME good parts, 2 actually. :3

I likes 1 of your parts ScrewedComedy, you have a good and funny stickman style and I liked the part of Tommy, it was too short but good. :D

So you, I didn't really enjoyed this collab but if you make another one in future, keep my suggestions in mind. :)

Bertn

Score: 10

"One of the best collabs ever. :3"

submission: Cardboard City

date: July 13, 2008

Good work Morrow, you made a great collab about this great idea! (: I think all the parts were awesome, great effects, great animation and great style! :3

The preloader game was kind of hard, my top score was something like 2500. xD Maybe you could make him jump higher?
The menu was awesome, there was even a cardboard SKATER! :D Awesome job Morrow.

All the parts were overall pretty great, everyone did a greate job AND congrats to the daily 2nd. :3

*Recommendng for NG Collab Collection and praying for front page<3*

5/5
10/10

Bertn

Score: 9

"Kind of awsome! :3"

submission: A Bread's Life

date: June 11, 2008

I liked it, good animation style, nice graphics and ofcourse, WONDERFUL MUSIC.

I like the idea, I love Nirvana, really good animation.

The animation is also pretty smooth so good job. :3

So for short, nice animation and keep it up! :D

Bertn

Score: 9

"AWESOME! :D"

submission: Bahamut's Newgrounds

date: June 10, 2008

Really nice "My Newgrounds" animation, I enjoyed it. :3 It was really fun cuz you made it like it was real but it was just your awesome dragon who's speakin'.

Good job with this animation, I like the voice actor and I like your animation skills, I'm sure you could make great movies. :)

So yea, for short, I loved Bahamut's Newgrounds and keep it up! :D

Bertn

Score: 8

"Good game :3"

submission: The James Bond Game

date: June 10, 2008

It was fun to play, even if I sucked hard. (score: 836 xD) But yea, the graphics are nice, the gameplay is fun, the bonus is also good. I really liked the James Bond tune, it's wonderful. :3

I also liked the menu with the bullet, good graphics, good job.

Anyway, I still have some suggestions. :3

1. Make a game in the same style but with a story. A game where we have to shoot other agents to complete a mission or something like that. :)
2. I liked the way the hand and the gun moved but ad a 'shot sound' and a shot movement.
3. Time bonus? Make a target that gives a Time Bonus, that makes it even more fun :D
4. Gun upgrade! ^_^

Nothing more to say I think, good job and keep it up.

Bertn

Score: 10

"Pure awesomeness. :3"

submission: Skate Flash Collab 2

date: June 10, 2008

One of the best collabs EVER, I really enjoyed watching it and this is also the reason why I joined the SFC so. :3

Well, like I did with the Pico Day Skate Collab I'm going to review every part separate so, let's get started:

The menu+intro:

Awesome menu, just a nice clean style with everything you need, good job with that. The intro is also very nice, just some random shit. :D (Also, the Easter Egg is in the skater at the menu, CLICK IT NOW :3)

Marcy:

Nice part, good tricks, good graphics but yea, maybe a little bit too much sound effects. But still good job in the original Marcy style with nice effects, GOOD JOB!

Cronic:

The same old school Cronic style like I know it :D Good music, nice realistic tricks and awesome BG's! :3 Also good sound effects. :)

Jestar:

One of my favorites! :D Really awesome and good. Smooth animation, good animation and even humor :3 Very nice animation, keep it up Jestar! :3

Lochie:

The awesome MC motiontween style of Lochie, awesome! :D Realistic, good sound effects, just the best. I freakin' love Lochies style. :3

Mraw:

Also wonderful animation, nice BG, funny and and smooth animation. I really like the style of Mraw, it's so smoothie and good. Love it :)

GFD:

Good FBF animation, funny and smooth. Not much to say about, really good. :3

Tommy:

Really funny, maybe not realistic but good animation. Very good outro for this wonderful animation. :3 Also funny song, I like it. :) But how can he skate faster than a car? xD Also good end, I liked it. :D

The credits:

Awesome, good music, funny animation and smooth, really awesome! :3

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So overall, very good Collab, keep it up guys and I'm looking forward to see the Skate Flash Collab 3! :3

Bertn

Score: 8

"Pretty funny. :3"

submission: A breads life

date: June 10, 2008

I liked it! :3 It was really funny and I really liked how the bread moves. The story line was also kind of good. I thought that on the message from the doctor there would be something like "You became toast" but then I saw the smile and the "cancer note" and I really had to laugh. :D

Also good job with this animation and keep it up Lochie. :)

Bertn

PS: RIP bread.

Score: 10

"AWESOME RANDOMNESS :D"

submission: Gone to Bel Air, brb.

date: June 10, 2008

Freakin' awesome lochie :') The song just fits perfect with your style of random animating. :3

And did I just see the pirate of the Pirate Preloader? Ö Anyway, good job, I really liked it, you're skills are the best. :3

Your MC motion twee animation is the best and even your FBF animation is good, ILUVYOU! x)

Bertn

Score: 5

"Average. :)"

submission: Haze: Say No To Nectar

date: June 10, 2008

This game could use a lot more effort and a lot of improvements.

First of all, the drawings and the graphics. :3 Everything looked a little bit noobish, please improve those.

Second, SOUND! The voice acting quality was pretty bad. You could search a professional voice actor at the BBS forum. :D

3th, the storyline wasn't really original or funny. Try to write a good and funny script and animate it then.

Anyway, it's not a bad start but you could make your animation a lot better. :3

Good luck and I hope I helped,

Bertn

Score: 3

"No flash, bad music."

submission: Random Scribblings

date: June 10, 2008

Well, it wasn't bad but it wasn't really an animation.

It pretty smooth for a stopmotion and the graphics aren't horrible but there a lot you could improve.

First of all, make something more original then just a hand drawing some ugly stuff, make something moving. :D

Second, OTHER MUSIC. This speedy version of Holiday by Green Day kind of sucks, original version is better OR search for a good song at the music portal, there are a lot of better songs than this remix there. :3

So for short, I didn't like the flash, make it more original, more fun, BETTER. :)

Good luck,

Bertn