Score: 6

"Not the best, not bad."

submission: Death Eagle: Remake

date: June 7, 2008

Ok, this movie isn't bad but it could use a lot of improvements.

To start, better effects! You can search for Flash effects at Google or look at the Newground tutorials. Your effects really need to get better. :3

Second, make your animation smoother cuz now it really looks noobish. x)

3th, GRAPHICS! Please make them better. The characters look really bad and they also move stupid. The guns look really good btw, that's a really good job.

4th, the music was a little bit annoying but the sound effects are good. :3

5th, blood effects? The blood you made is just like some red lines, use some alpha or something to make it look more like real blood.

6th, improve the menu, don't make it just white with some text, do something with it! :D Add a BG or something but don't leave it just blank. :3

Overall, your flash skills could use a lot of improvement but it's a good start. Just keep practicing and I think you could be a good animator! ;D

Keep it up,

Bertn

Score: 9

"Deathgore is CUTE x)"

submission: Deathgore

date: June 7, 2008

Really nice movie you got there, smoothie animation and funny style. I think Deathgore looks cute but also dangerous! :3

Also nice music but... SOUND EFFECTS? Ö I really missed the sound effects actually. Also, when the general or deathgore is talking you could use sounds. Voice acting isn't neccecery but you could add sounds like in Animal Crossing by Nintendo, that would make it really funny. :)

At last, I also think this is underrated, it deserves more than a 3.70. :4

Overall, nice movie, keep it up! :D

Bertn

Score: 8

"Nice game! :D"

submission: Automaton prt2

date: June 7, 2008

The game is really good, the graphics are nice and it's fun to play. Sometimes it's a little bit boring but overall it's a really good game.

The beginning animation is really nice and smooth, I like your style of animating so keep that up! :3 You also used some really good effects like the way you made the menu look old, etc. I also like the main character, it's cute and style mystic.

So for short, really nice point and click game, it's wonderful! :D

Keep up the good work,

Bertn

Score: 6

"Good job! :)"

submission: High Ball

date: June 7, 2008

It isn't original but it's really well done. The graphics are good, the sound effects are funny and the gameplay is smooth. :3

But with this concept you could do a lot more. I also made a ball kick up game once and it's a lot more fun if you can choose other BG's, other cursors, even other balls! :D

Also, you have sounds but... MUSIC? :) Give the game a nice loop so it doesn't get boring that fast. (;

I hope I helped you and keep up the good stuff! :D

Bertn

Score: 3

"Good idea, a lot of bugs."

submission: D-Struction

date: June 7, 2008

I like the idea but the game has a lot of bugs and looks a little bit noobish.

First of all, make better graphics and some more animation cuz for now it's like 80% AS and 20% animation. With more animation your game will look more smoothie. :)

Second, make sure that all the bugs are gone! When the ball is of the screen it's hard to get it back, you can just pick up the ball to destroy stuff, etc.

3th, make it longer! There are only like 4 levels, the one with the houses, the apartment, the dinosaur and the guy. Make more! :3

So for short, the concept is good but it could be a lot better! At last, here are some ideas you could maybe use:

-make a timer, so the people have to destroy everything before the timer is out.
-make sound effects so it's more fun to destroy stuff.
-and just to make sure you get it: FIX THE BUGS! :D

Bertn

Score: 9

"I liked it! :3"

submission: The Yoshi Show 2

date: June 7, 2008

The graphics are average but funny, the random story line is funny and it gave me a good laugh. The animation was also really smooth and funny. the main character looks a little bit nerdish but he's still ok. Also, like you said, the sounds is a bit off. :')

But for short, nice animation! :D And one last thing, chance the first part, cuz of that some people will think it's just a spam loop animation! :)

Good job and keep it up! :3

Bertn

Score: 10

"Pico+SFC=AWESOMENESS! :')"

submission: PicoDay Skate Collab!

date: May 5, 2008

Just awesome!

1st, the menu! It really rocked, I just love the Morrow style and the funny sound. :3
The sounds are really funny! ^_^

2nd, the intros. I know they are made by Night-Mare cuz I've read it in the thread and I really like them. There's only one bad thing about it, it really slows down the whole animation. It's skate, and skate has to be fast! :') But it's still really niice.

The Animations:

GFD:

Awesome! Nice BG and wonderful FBF animation. I liked the tricks, I liked the effect at the beginning, I like the whole part! :D

Morrowdays:

Really good, I just love your style, it looks smooth and still funny. :3 Maybe a little bit too short but still good!

G-force:

Maybe one of the parts I didn't liked that much. It isn't bad but except of the skate sounds there isn't much skate style. It still isn't bad. :3

Tommy:

Wonderful as always! The character was really cute (:3) and tricks where nice. I also liked the photograph effect you used! ^_^ Good job Tommy!

Night-Mare: (aka Lochie)

My favorite part for sure! :D It's just perfect, smooth and good. I really love it and Nene looks UBER cute! :') The tricks she did where just wonderful, nothing more to say about that I think. :3 Perfect job!

Mraw:

Really funny! The tankman is really good drawn and the tricks where funny. I liked the cockjoke at the end. x') Good job mraw! :3

Marcy:

Really good job, as always! It was really funny and smooth animated, nothing more to say about that I think! ;D

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For short, yes, Pico Day needed some skateboarding! This movie is a little bit underrated but it really rocks, keep up the good work SFC! :)

Bertn

*recommending for skate collection*

Score: 4

"Not a bad start. :3"

submission: tank training 3

date: May 5, 2008

It's not a bad start. It just needs a lot of improvement. :)

1st of all, make sure the AS is clean and good explained.

2nd, make sure there aren't any bugs in the game cuz that makes it really shity.

3th, graphic improvement! Everything looks really messy and not everything is really smooth. Also make some FBF animation, that makes everything looks better.

4th, sound effects! For now, you only have 1 sound effect. A stupid shooting sound. x')
You could use some different shooting sounds, background music, a sound if you hit something, a sound when the tank is driving, etc. Just use your fantasy! ^^

So for short, your game needs a lot of improvement but with enough practicing I'm pretty sure you can make something good of it. :) Just keep it going!

I really hope I helped you a little bit,

Bertn

PS: one last thing, change the height of the flash cuz for newgrounds it's a little bit to big, it's only possible to play, and see everything, in pop-up. :')

Score: 10

"Crazy! :D"

submission: Dreamboarding

date: May 5, 2008

Really good animation, everything was very smooth, the FBF was just insane and I really like how you used the background. This is a very original skate animation and I really like it. The way you draw the trucks, the way the board crashes, everything is just perfect!

About the music, it's really great. Respect for your mate Howli, I really love it! It fits good with the animation.

I hope you got a high score for your exam cuz you really deserve it with such a great flash!

Bertn

Score: 10

"CUTE x'D"

submission: TT: 004 Educated Fish

date: March 19, 2008

This was just CUTENESS :3

I really liked it ^_^ It's pretty short but very good. My favorite TT is still the second one but they all rock :D

And about this one, I think it's just perfect xD Drawings are very cute, animation is smooth and the song is funny. Nothing more to say about it I think ;D

Bertn