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One of the best collabs EVER, I really enjoyed watching it and this is also the reason why I joined the SFC so. :3
Well, like I did with the Pico Day Skate Collab I'm going to review every part separate so, let's get started:
The menu+intro:
Awesome menu, just a nice clean style with everything you need, good job with that. The intro is also very nice, just some random shit. :D (Also, the Easter Egg is in the skater at the menu, CLICK IT NOW :3)
Marcy:
Nice part, good tricks, good graphics but yea, maybe a little bit too much sound effects. But still good job in the original Marcy style with nice effects, GOOD JOB!
Cronic:
The same old school Cronic style like I know it :D Good music, nice realistic tricks and awesome BG's! :3 Also good sound effects. :)
Jestar:
One of my favorites! :D Really awesome and good. Smooth animation, good animation and even humor :3 Very nice animation, keep it up Jestar! :3
Lochie:
The awesome MC motiontween style of Lochie, awesome! :D Realistic, good sound effects, just the best. I freakin' love Lochies style. :3
Mraw:
Also wonderful animation, nice BG, funny and and smooth animation. I really like the style of Mraw, it's so smoothie and good. Love it :)
GFD:
Good FBF animation, funny and smooth. Not much to say about, really good. :3
Tommy:
Really funny, maybe not realistic but good animation. Very good outro for this wonderful animation. :3 Also funny song, I like it. :) But how can he skate faster than a car? xD Also good end, I liked it. :D
The credits:
Awesome, good music, funny animation and smooth, really awesome! :3
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So overall, very good Collab, keep it up guys and I'm looking forward to see the Skate Flash Collab 3! :3
Bertn
Author's Response:
thansk for teh breakdown we appreciate a nice clean review.
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I liked it! :3 It was really funny and I really liked how the bread moves. The story line was also kind of good. I thought that on the message from the doctor there would be something like "You became toast" but then I saw the smile and the "cancer note" and I really had to laugh. :D
Also good job with this animation and keep it up Lochie. :)
Bertn
PS: RIP bread.
Author's Response:
The bread ollies when he walks.
I SHALL ANIMATE MY BEST JUST FOR YOU. <3
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Freakin' awesome lochie :') The song just fits perfect with your style of random animating. :3
And did I just see the pirate of the Pirate Preloader? Ö Anyway, good job, I really liked it, you're skills are the best. :3
Your MC motion twee animation is the best and even your FBF animation is good, ILUVYOU! x)
Bertn
Author's Response:
Yes, you did see Mr. PiratePreloader in there. :D
Thank you for saying my tweenage is the best. :D
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I really like this animation cuz first of all, it's with pirates (I'm making a Pirate Collab, w00t xD) and second, the animation was very good and smooth and the graphics are almost perfect. :3
The song was a little bit boring but still funny. I really liked how you made the pirate sing.
Very good job and keep it up! :D
Bertn
PS: Did you change the preloader? x)
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This game could use a lot more effort and a lot of improvements.
First of all, the drawings and the graphics. :3 Everything looked a little bit noobish, please improve those.
Second, SOUND! The voice acting quality was pretty bad. You could search a professional voice actor at the BBS forum. :D
3th, the storyline wasn't really original or funny. Try to write a good and funny script and animate it then.
Anyway, it's not a bad start but you could make your animation a lot better. :3
Good luck and I hope I helped,
Bertn
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KK thanx
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Well, it wasn't bad but it wasn't really an animation.
It pretty smooth for a stopmotion and the graphics aren't horrible but there a lot you could improve.
First of all, make something more original then just a hand drawing some ugly stuff, make something moving. :D
Second, OTHER MUSIC. This speedy version of Holiday by Green Day kind of sucks, original version is better OR search for a good song at the music portal, there are a lot of better songs than this remix there. :3
So for short, I didn't like the flash, make it more original, more fun, BETTER. :)
Good luck,
Bertn
Author's Response:
Thanks for the advice. This was really just a test to see what it would look like. I'm pretty amazed that it got in actually! I'm working on another one that will be animated instead of me just drawing stuff. I'll put better music on the other one because no many people really liked the remix.
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Nice graphics, funny story and clocks, PERFECT :D
You also made good use of Speakonia, I like that. :3 I thinks this game is a little bit underrated cuz it's a clock movie. I think it's very awesome and funny and I really enjoyed it.
Anyway, keep it up ToadClock! :)
Bertn
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Well it used to have a 4.0. However, some lame kid (could be plural) has been down-voting it every day for the past year, so it's lowered a considerable deal.
So it wasn't really "underrated" before.
Yeah, I like using Speakonia. It gives it a classic feel. And, if manipulated right, the program can present everything the way you want it (too many people are hasty with their Speakonia).
Glad you enjoyed it!
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"The graphics sucked but it was fun! :3"
Yea, the graphics are really bad but I had fun playing this little game. I liked the password system (Really good done) and the music.
I also liked how you mixed platform with above screen.
Look, make better graphics, do some more animating and your game will be very nice. Your AS is good so just pump up your drawing skills and I think you could be a good Flash maker. :D
Bertn
Author's Response:
The music was chosen for its puropse and i am gald you like it. I do need to improve my drawing skills your right. But the graphics arent everything
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I enjoyed this little movie, it was funny and I liked the song!
"Ringringringringring BANANAPHONE! :D"
I like how you draw so sketchy but maybe you should try to make your graphics look perfect and do it fbf, that would be awesome. :D
The way the characters moves sometimes is just so freakin' funny, I also like that. :3
I liked how you used the white flash to go from part to part, good job! :)
So for short, a good overall video, keep it up!
Bertn
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This was trucking awesome. :3 The song is awesome, it reminds me of the good old Pokémon days. I also like the voice acting, it's really funny.
The graphics were ok, they are really good. I also liked the old school menu, it's just perfect! :3
The fact that this movie starts like all Pokémon games makes it even more awesome, keep it up Bahamut and I'll look forward to your 100th submission. :D
Bertn
Author's Response:
"TOTALLY UNDERRATED :D"
Indeed. Thanks B*rtn.
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